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At a loss for words?
by la_spice @ Monday, May. 05, 2008 - 13:12:06

Sometimes we can't think of the right words to say and end up saying nothing. In any relationship not only is it good to talk it's essential.

Unspoken Thoughts

I never told you that I loved you
The moment never seemed quite right
I never said how much I needed you
To hold me close and tight
I never told you that my heart leaps
Whenever I hear your voice
I know I should have said these things
I know I had the choice

I should have told you that I loved you
I should have “seized the day”
I should have said how much I needed you
To hold me tight that way
I should have said how much heart leapt
Each time you spoke my name
But I thought that once these words were spoken
Things would have never been quite the same

Our lives were very busy, so many things left unsaid
Those things I never told you, she told you them instead

©Marian Barker

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blckbirdblckbird pro
2008-05-05 @ 17:12

That is delightful and beautifully written.

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-05 @ 17:50

Thank you :)

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spiritbirdspiritbird pro
2008-05-05 @ 18:02

Walk a mile in my shoes

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-05 @ 18:05

Exactly! :))

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SeasideManSeasideMan pro
2008-05-05 @ 18:38

I like that. It has a nice rhythm and uses simple words to express deep thoughts that can apply to any of us.

Very good.

Tom.

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-05 @ 18:42

Thank you Tom

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RunDontWalkRunDontWalk pro
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2008-05-06 @ 01:13

I wonder who you wrote that for?

xxx

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-06 @ 04:12

:)

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murphymolemurphymole pro
2008-05-06 @ 09:45

Very true and very nice :yes:

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-06 @ 16:55

Thank you :)

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boredrichboredrich [Member]
2008-05-06 @ 11:26

very good and you are soo right communication on both parts is a must for the relationship

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2008-05-06 @ 17:04

Exactly! :yes:

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