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by la_spice @ Sunday, Jun. 10, 2007 - 06:24:00

It can happen to anyone. We've probably all been here, done it and got the scars to prove it! Here's two sides of the same coin.

He's Gone

Gone
He left
A long note
He said that "we"
Could never be "one"
My hopes lay in tatters
Now nothing else matters
I'm perplexed, lonely and broken
Perhaps "we" should have spoken? He's gone.

****

She's Gone

Gone
She left
A long note
She said that "we"
Could never be "one"
My hopes lay in tatters
Now nothing else matters
I'm perplexed, lonely and broken
Perhaps "we" should have spoken? She's gone.

©Marian Barker


 
 

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la_spicela_spice [Member]
2007-06-10 @ 06:25

Previous Comments

“That has a lot of truth in it... and is very sad too”... Sara-d 2/3/2007

“Oh dear too much emotion for the midnight hour. What can anyone say because you express the totality of loneliness at least in a few of your poems. It reminds me of staring out of my flat in St Andrews over the old Railway Station [ now no more ] many moons ago unable to believe what had happened to me !!!! “ Davidjohn 8/3/2007

Thank you.

normalguynormalguy [Member]
2007-06-10 @ 06:35
well thats wrecked my Sunday - at least i got the Grand prix - have a good day :)

la_spicela_spice [Member]
2007-06-10 @ 06:46

Ooops - sorry! Enjoy your day anyhow :D

sweetladyjanesweetladyjane pro
2007-06-10 @ 08:08

That's pretty much what it feels like when it happens.

What can I say? Communication breakdown comes to mind...

murphymolemurphymole [Member]
2007-06-10 @ 13:06

Sad but true, give me a good row anyday to clear the air (oh and making up after).

myriad1965myriad1965 [Member]
2007-06-11 @ 22:12

OK I'm lonely - hence blogging at this hour - but not broken.

Here's to what ever the future may hold

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