Mon premier poème français
Je veux savoir a parler français
Je ne parle pas très bien
Je suis une femme anglaise
Qui écrire des poèmes de mienne
Je voudrais de faire meilleur
Et écrire quelque chose unique
Mais c’est très difficile
Et n’est pas une pique nique !
©Marian Barker


Hi Marion,
Well done on your first french poem. I didn't understand the savoir in the first line - I'm probably being dim. The rest was very good, I know you went out on a limb.
I've read loads of your poems - they have made me laugh and cry. Especially about your girls growing up. Your right it goes to quick.
I want to be clever and write something that rhymns. This is as good as it gets - so I'll just say - Loved it!
Catherine (Rebecca's mum)-(c u next sunday)